jueves, 15 de marzo de 2012

It has been suggested that all obese children should be taken by law to special medical centres in order to save their lives. Do you support this proposition? Explain why.

What is the obese children? There are the children that have weight problems, they weigh more. That children needs the help for the parents decrease the weight and to contribute emotional support because the obese children have problems on the school with the other people. They have complex and the childs of the class bullies that children and they can have depressions.

The parents have to help our sons that are obese doing diets and physical exercices. If the parents doesn't help the child, difficulty the child find a solution. In this examples it can be possible that the law take the children of her family to help the child. But I think that is inhuman take out a child of her family both the parents and the son. It's true that in the special centre where they go, can find a solution for their problem, but the family has to try before on their own.

For this, I think that the law can't take out the children of her families, they can provoke more problems to the child because he can feels alone.

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  1. Your ideas were very interesting. However, you should try to check your writings for mistakes before editing. There are many grammar mistakes. Look for five mistakes, see if you can correct them in your next comment, ok?

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    1. What are the obese children? There are the children that have weight problems, they weigh more. That child needs the help for the parents decrease the weight and to contribute emotional support because the obese children have problems on the school with the other people. They have complex and the children of the class bullies that children and they can have depressions.

      The parents have to help our sons that are obese doing diets and physical exercises. If the parents don’t help the child, difficulty the child finds a solution. In these examples it can be possible that the law take the children of her family to help the child. But I think that is inhuman take out a child of her family both the parents and the son. It's true that in the special center where they go, can find a solution for their problem, but the family has to try before on their own.

      For this, I think that the law can't take out the children of her families; they can provoke more problems to the child because he can feel alone.

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  2. OK, this looks much better! Well-done!

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